The Sandcastle Girls Survives History

The first time I was introduced to author Chris Bohjalian, it was with The Night Strangers, a haunting tale that transcends the typical ghost story. It was a different kind of book for Bohjalian, one that stretched his imagination and storytelling to create a creepy atmospheric and supernatural thriller.

The Sandcastle Girls is nothing like that. It brings him back into more familiar territory, a vivid and captivating semi-historical novel that shares four generations of perspective with the focal point on Aleppo, Syria, 1915. It is there, in Aleppo, where one story ends. And it is there, in Aleppo, where one story begins.

The relevance of Aleppo during the World War I. 

Although Aleppo finds itself once again in the midst of a modern-day struggle within Syria, it is one of the oldest inhabited cities in the world and has undergone scores of transformations, transitions, and transgressions. In 1915, it belonged to the Ottoman Empire, one of oldest empires in history before its collapse.

By this time, the empire was in steady decline. Several political upheavals had caused it to teeter back and forth between a constitutional government with religious tolerance and a newly established "monarchy" that would aggravate growing ethnic conflicts. With the outbreak of World War I, the Ottomans had allied with Germany, largely because of their long-standing conflict with Russia.

While some might debate whether Ottoman-Armenians in Anatolia used the war to break from the empire or were merely reacting to an escalation of Christian and Armenian resentment, the result was the same. The Russian victories in Anatolia caused ethnic and religious tensions to reach a peak.

Almost immediately, the Ottoman Empire issued Tehcir Law, which evacuated and deported Armenians before descending into massacres and genocide. Between 1 and 1.5 million Armenians were killed during what Armenians call the Medz Yeghern.

It is also during this dark period that Bohjalian introduces Elizabeth Endicott, an American who volunteers to join a humanitarian mission with her father, a doctor, on behalf of the Boston-based Friends of Armenia. Interestingly enough, she is introduced to the reader by her descendant, Laura Petrosian. Petrosian is a novelist living in New York who begins to discover her Armenian heritage.

The four generations of perspective on a dark page of history.

Although Endicott and Petrosian are the principal characters, Bohjalian does not limit points of view shared in The Sandcastles Girls. He brings to life many characters who are directly and indirectly entwined. They add a greater context of the genocide and a sense of scope to Aleppo and Gallipoli.

In the beginning, the changing perspective can be jarring and disruptive. Even Petrosian sometimes feels like an interruption. But as the story takes hold and unfolds, it becomes clear that writing this novel any other way would not have worked. In providing a comprehensive view of this time in Armenian history, the author does more than tell a story of love, loss, and survival.

By bridging Petrosian's research and her own memories with being Armenian-American (despite not knowing what that meant) and Endicott's life as a progressive woman who wanted to find more purpose in life, Bohjalian spans four generations, each with different ideas on how to think about what happened. In a sense, he simultaneously provides varied global views in 1915, transformative genealogical views over a century, and the story of two people who fell in love.

The story of love, loss, and survival against all odds.

By and large, the central plot line focuses on Endicott as a young American arriving in Aleppo. It is in Aleppo that she meets Armen, a young Armenian engineer, who has lost his wife and daughter.

Although the two have feelings for each other, their informal and somewhat secret courtship comes to an end when Armen is forced to take flight from the Turks. He makes his way across the hostile countryside toward Egypt to join the British army. Endicott must also face hardships and place her life at risk. While Armen is introduced to trench warfare, she sees the so-called relocation camps firsthand.

The only true comfort they find along their separate journeys are the increasingly transparent letters they write to one another, never knowing if any letter will survive. These letters, along with Petrosian's investigative tone in the modern world, provide well-paced breaks from a bleak and unforgiving world. So do the stories of everyone from Armenian survivors and diplomats to the German soldiers who defy orders and photograph the Armenian victims, but never with the ease of Petrosian.

Bohjalian outdoes himself with a fantastic story that touches him personally and deeply. In doing so, he will touch you too. He doesn't even do it with atrocity, but with the courage of people in the face of it.

The Sandcastle Girls by Chris Bohjalian Etches 8.2 On The Liquid Hip Richter Scale. 

Although the work is fiction, Bohjalian grounds much of the story in fact. He incorporates letters and accounts from real people in history, even if the characters who convey those words are fiction. And yes, the author says Petrosian is a female version of himself in many ways. He also traveled to Armenia and Armenian communities in Lebanon.

The Sandcastle Girls: A Novel is available on Amazon and you can order the book from Barnes & Noble. The novel is also on iBooks and as an audiobook on iTunes. The audiobook is read by Cassandra Campbell and Alison Fraser. Campbell, who takes on the bulk of the book, reads this story of regret despite making the best possible decision with conviction.

Daniel H. Wilson Gets Amped. You?

There are two ways to size up Amped by Daniel H. Wilson. Enjoy the fast-paced, near future techno-thriller despite its shortcomings. Or suffer through it, longing for character development and more literary substance.

I chose the former because it wouldn't be here otherwise. But I still think most people need to know more before they buy it. Many reader reviews are mixed because they expect something else.

Boiled to its core, this book is largely about prejudice, except it uses science fiction as a twist. It's not the color of people's skin that drives discrimination, it's what lies just under their skin — technology.

The Amped concept is greater than the parts that play it.

Amped can be a bit mind numbing when you think about it. Technological advances in the next decade or so could bring part of Wilson's world to light. Technology could be implanted to help people regulate their minds — an immediate cure for mental conditions or better interface for prosthetics.

The solution is nothing less than a miracle. For Owen Gray, it changed his life. He suffered from epilepsy and was prone to seizures. Compared to other "amps," the technology helps him function. But for others — children who were slow learners or maybe diagnosed with ADHD — the technology means something else all together. They get a Flowers For Algernon ride up the intellect ladder.

Right, intelligence-enhacing surgery is one of several familiar hooks, with Wilson taking it a few steps further en masse. Once the government helps fund hundreds and thousands of people to rectify their shortcomings, people start to wonder how average humans might keep up. They become a minority.

In some cases, they become scary. Military test subjects have a new way to look on the battlefield. Mixed and matched pushes the envelope of enhancement. Highly focused concentration can alter human chemistry. And the creepiest part: Even if the amps are surgically removed, the brain remembers the paths and patterns they helped to stimulate. There is no going back.

The frightfully vivid flashback in history seen as a near-future event. 

The book opens on the same day that the Supreme Court issues a controversial but populous opinion. Amplified humans are different from humans, and therefore aren't entitled to the same set of rights.



Some of the changes play out like the lead up to World War II. Without rights, amped citizens are tossed out by their landlords, absolved of their property rights, and eventually subjected to ghettos. The idea is the same as it was more than 50 years ago. Isolate the undesirables from the greater population.

Although Owen Gray is hardly as noticeable, he is quickly caught up in the wave of mistrust and hate. But unlike many other amps who suddenly fund themselves unprotected, Gray isn't as ordinary as he thinks. His father, one of the technological pioneers, gave Gray much more than an epilepsy patch.

Gray, who suffered a traumatic brain injury in an accident, has been implanted with an experimental military amp in an effort to save his life. It has been sitting inside his skull dormant. So he makes his way across the country to find the only person who can figure it out — one of the people his father worked with during the initial trails.

And there is someone else: Lyle Crosby, one of only twelve people who was implanted with a similar device. Discharged from the service after the rogue program was discovered, Crosby is already organizing a resistance — one that has dubious backer for a different goal.

As a blazingly fast summer read, it won't take long. Wilson even lays out some literary tricks to hasten the pace, inserting news reports and political briefs to shorten the time in between any action, which is mostly handled well.

The other price, of course, is that the protagonist relies on being an everyman hero without any time to answer the bigger question about what it means to be human. His one and only love interest is equally unconvincing against the backdrop of entertainment.

A couple quick graphs about Robert H. Wilson. 

Given Wilson has a Ph.D. in robotics from Carnegie Mellon University, his technological aptitude is always readily convincing. After earning his degree, he moved to Portland and started writing some mind-bending and entertaining books that often read like more accessible (but not as engrossing) Michael Crichton.

He is easily best known for his book Robopocalypse. That book could have easily ended up a B-movie on the SyFy Channel. But Wilson has more than tech insight in his corner. He has a lot of luck. Steven Spielberg is directing the movie adaption, which is set for release in 2014.

Amped By Daniel H. Wilson Ports 3.2 On The Liquid Hip Richter Scale. 

The concept is cool and the book is all right for what it is — entertainment that raises a few deeper questions. It makes you wonder whether technology could eventually change the human experience or if that would be considered a human experience. The answers aren't in there and maybe that's a point. Some of these technologies already exist.

Amped: A Novel by Daniel H. Wilson is available on Amazon and you can find the novel at Barnes & Noble. Indie shop Alibris also carries it. The book can also be downloaded for iBooks or the audiobook from iTunes. The book is narrated by Robbie Daymond. He helps solidify the writing style, but doesn't add much more to Owen Gray than is already on the page.